Seriousle's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Floki]

fantastic piece really one of the better ones i have seen, im curious though especially with your lighting, so you have based on your highlights a large light from the right hand side, or/and behind on the right side there, however, the inconsistencys come, where you also have based on the left hand cheek light from the top center, the nose has direct right light the chin has light from the bottom right hand side the right cheek is directly right and the forhead has a center light with no shading from the hair :) overall you have around 6 or 7 diffrent light directions based on what i can see just causing some inconsistancy, which is why i gave a 4.5 not a 5, but please this is abosolutly one of the best pieces keep them coming and (best char ever :P )

i just figured most people would like an honest review, because simply being told amazing doesnt give much to learn from :P

Rhasdra responds:

Best comment I got in ages. This kind of stuff helps so much!

Thank you.

[Untitled]

Amazing piece mate, im curious though in lower parts of the clothes, and the outer parts too, your shading went from smooth and it looks like you put in the effort to on the outsides, scratchy and like you rushed to finish? especially prominent to me in the lower quater :) however! please dont think of this as a stab at you, overall the piece is really well done and keep up the awesome work :D if it was a conscious design choice to scratch and focus less on the outer and then work into the facial area then fair enough :)

Luciaea responds:

Thanks for commenting! I actually started shading in the lower quarter and applied more work as I neared focal points... attempting to master detailed vs. illustrated parts of the work. Less of a conscious design choice and more of just practicing getting the important parts as detailed as possible.